To begin I would like to say your research paper is quite thorough. You included all points that would end up having effect on your final research paper along with a blending of ideas present in your power point. I found the metaphysical aspects of your paper quite compelling. As I read through your introductory paragraphs and the following body, I came to the conclusion that abuse fosters psychological problems and sexual dysfunction. I found the contribution of the literary devices quite refreshing; all too often in the presentations there was a lack of quotes to back the physical denotation. Points to consider for furthering your argument: you seemed to overlook the setting. I would consider checking out Marissa Regan’s blog. She did an excellent job of describing the effects setting can have on the human condition. Overall very professional job, I hope your end grade reflects this.
To begin I would like to say your research paper is quite thorough. You included all points that would end up having effect on your final research paper along with a blending of ideas present in your power point. I found the metaphysical aspects of your paper quite compelling. As I read through your introductory paragraphs and the following body, I came to the conclusion that abuse fosters psychological problems and sexual dysfunction. I found the contribution of the literary devices quite refreshing; all too often in the presentations there was a lack of quotes to back the physical denotation.
ReplyDeletePoints to consider for furthering your argument: you seemed to overlook the setting. I would consider checking out Marissa Regan’s blog. She did an excellent job of describing the effects setting can have on the human condition. Overall very professional job, I hope your end grade reflects this.